Unite 1 and unit 2

This is my unfinished  work. this is drawing of a computer. I used the transfer drawing method.
I found a picture from the web and printed it. The theme was set by the tutor. I rubbed oil pastel on the back of the picture and then taped it in my sketchbook and draw over the top of the picture with ball point pen.

This is what I think about my work


This is what Shawn thinks about my work. It is good but it needs to be finished. The detail is there 100 per cent. Jack thinks it looks cool and to could not be improved. I am going to finish this drawing later.

This is my finished drawing